ZannaShepherd

Hi iamanaspiringwriter, Nice work on your short story! I really enjoyed reading your work and I loved the overall theme of it. It was very bitter sweet, and I'm glad ...

Hello, For a short story, I'd say yours was very well written. It did seem to move fast at times, but that's mostly unavoidable. I really liked the concept of ...

I really liked the beginning of your story, and it was quite well written. There are a few nitpicks I'll point out, but most of your problem is that you ...

I love Beauty and the Beast! I read through your story, blue is what I like, and red is things you should change (I changed most of them already. I’m ...

I Loved it! Especially the first part We look forever, not grasping what we have. We can use our eyes to find the hope in everyone, But we just find ...

Hi, Ok, I really enjoyed your story, it resembled warriors well, but I like how you took from the aspect of a loner instead of a clan cat. You're descriptions ...

Hi Dakota, Like, Wow! I Totally loved this piece of your writing, cliche’s and all. (Of course, I mean it’s you we’re talking about here). Anywho, I only found a ...

Hi, I'm here as requested. I really liked your story, the plot was very intriguing and well paced. I did notice that you tend to change tenses a lot, and ...

Hi JabberHut! I really enjoyed reading your work. It moved smoothly (all except the places I'll point out later) and I liked how you contrasted things, it made for a ...

Ok, I really enjoyed your story, especially the end, where we find out it's a table lamp explaining everything. You have great description, and unique writing style. I found a ...

Wow, your story is very (very) full of emotion. You have a great writing style, that's very unique. I didn't find any gramatical errors, so thumbs up to that. I ...

Hi Dakota, Sorry I haven't had time to review your work yet, it's very long and will take me weeks (maybe months) to review all of it. (I've already read ...

Ok, interesting story here. The characters were likable, and you gave enough info n them, but this piece lacked in description of any and everything. We have the facts but ...

Ok, I liked your piece of writing, very descriptive and captivating. Nice job. It was a little dark, but that's just a personal opinion and not something you should worry ...

Ok your short story (heavy on the short) but that's ok; Everyone knows garbage men pick up garbage, but this garbage man is a little different than most. He's not ...