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Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
Gah! I love these books (even though i've only read the first one). I can't wait to see the movie for the Lightning Thief
Jul 22, 2009 -
Re: deleted chapter
Don't worry, the characters are developed later in the story (When they're in purgatory). Yeah, I know its a bit cliche but the story gets more creative as it progresses ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Leaving Humanity
Wow, this was very good and mysterious.I think all the other reviewers covered all the critique. Very nice job. Keep up the good work. :D
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Night visitor
Oh-oh! Nice, I loved how you built up the tension and displayed mystery. Overall this is very good, and I like it. Keep up the good work, :).
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: Lonely Girl
This is very nice poem. I love all of the metaphors you use, they successfully help me understand what the girl is feeling. Very nice job.
Feb 9, 2009