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I'm actually quite jelous now. An answer to your question, yes you did keep it up to the same standard as before. It would be nice if you could make ...

Hi, i said I'd read the other chapters :) It was Friday afternoon. Two days after I fainted in the cafeteria. I still wince whenever I remember that embarrassing situation. ...

I've seen this story a lot, just on the forums and when random work pops up but I never clicked on it, always wanted to. Its the title that really ...

Hi, I really liked this poem though as the rhyming patterns are inconsistent it spoils the general flow and effective that you are trying to potray. I am for you ...

I know your not ment to put compliments on this site but I couldn't help myself. I was going to review your story so I read through it, searching for ...

I think this is wonderfully imaginative story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I do wonder if you have given away too much in the prologue and sometimes the information ...

Hi, I'm izzy and I will be reviewing your work today. The moon shone brightly in the cold, dark night. Ghostly clouds sailed in the sky, sometimes covering the full, ...

Hi I did like this poem a lot, and I thought it was pretty ironic to put a smiley on the end. The only thing I would have to say ...

Okay, for today I will only review the first chapter because I am short for time. But this story really drew me in, I liked the fact you kept its ...

Hiya Mads, won't be a long review because I can see you at school and talk to you about it god,its getting better. Your writting has improved so much since ...

Hi i'm izzy and I will be reviewing your work today. Firstly I would just like to say I believe you are a very talented writer, especially for your age. ...

This is a nice little story. At first I found myself critising the simplistic lauguage but after a while I got so sucked into the story that It didn't matter. ...

Firstly I would just like to say you never leave your story un named when putting it on this site, not if you want feeback any way. Your story title ...

Hi mads, just giving ya a quick review, soz about town by the way ="MiriamHannah"]A cat skittered past her nervously and a bird flew so near to her that its ...

Rosabelle looked down through the branches and leaves of the tree. A broad smile on her face as John crept around below searching for her . The breeze swayed the ...