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I didn't edit it before I posted it(I probably should have said that somewhere). Editing is a very long, tedious and painful process for me so I'd rather know it's ...

Thanks a ton :) She is definitely fond of him. And he is kind of fond of her when she isn't making his life complicated(Which she does almost all the ...

Thanks. :) Don't even remember when I wrote it but it's one of the only things I have written that I actually liked so I might do a little more ...

Will do. Always happy to review. :)

Thank you for the edits! The weakest point of my writing is that I am not able to self edit. The thing I was trying to capture in the end(which ...

Thanks again for the review! Especially the grammar nazi-ing, since I am no good at it. I have actually picked up writing the story again. It has been sitting half ...

Thank you so much for those edits! I completely missed them. Some of the methods of speech though were intentional for the sake of character since it is Derrick telling ...

Part of the reason for the mass of detail and lack of plot in this first chapter is because it always bugs me when people write stories about bad things ...

Ah ha! I see it now! :D

believe me in the next couple of chapters you will learn why Derrik is so touchy about his family, also a large part of why his anger issues are as ...

I will post it as soon as I get enough points to. I am glad you're enjoying it so much :)

I like her ability to sense and manipulate light. I am eagerly awaiting more

I like this take on death. No scythe cloak and ominous single word sentences, just a guy doing his job. I also like his kindness to others, people and animals ...