Yuriiko

Hello there, wonderland. :) Okay. I know how this story means a lot for your university application, and so I'm here to do as best as I can to help ...

Hello anna! Hmm. I may not be old enough to read this, but hey, I find this very humorous and the swearing in your poem is something I'm immune of ...

Hey there. ^^ First off, I'm not quite sure if you have pulled off the story well. Maybe because I got confused at some points about the relationship of the ...

Hello there Djwicca! This seemed like a pretty rough draft to me. As far as I could tell, you really need to be careful of your misspellings- they're all over ...

Hey Alabaster! My name is Splendora and I’m a twin to my brother Derek. We both are a lot like each other and well, nothing else to say, we are ...

Hello Gg! The only thing that got me interested to read this was the 'description' under your title (warning us that this was going to be scary). I'm going to ...

Hey James! Whoop. I think you need to proofread your story before you confidently post it here (well, unless you want a thousand-word review ^^). I have caught several grammatical ...

Hello there, inthebeginnning! I think what you're offering has a lot of potential. I actually thought it was good but then there were some parts of the story were it ...

Hey there! The first thing I noticed is your punctuation. “Nothing . ” She said. “I’m going inside . ” I said. Those dots should be a comma, since there ...

Hello Solva! It's been months since I've pressed the keyboard just solely intended for a review. Oh well, I'm pretty sure this might get a little bit vague so please ...

Hello there, HostofHorus! I have to agree with Demeter regarding your tile. You could have played with words-use your creativity and all that-because some readers get discouraged just by reading ...

Hello there, Wolfdra! ^^ Hmm. What you have given us here is quite insufficient. Although you have an interesting story plot, you have failed building a bridge between your characters ...

Hello there! I purse my lips in the usual smile as you walk by with a short glance into my eyes. My head is throbbing. I'm dying to open my ...

Hello there ShadowKnight! Part I and II are going to be in the spoiler since it would take much space if not. :) I. Punctuation-A I have quoted a few ...

This made me laugh. ^^ I'm not sure if you really want me to give you a proper and structured review. But as I can see, I don't think I ...