Yoshiki

Well this story was REALLY confusing... XD It was pretty funny, enough to make you at least smile. It was a good length, without grammatical faults or misspellings. Not much ...

Well this story was REALLY confusing... XD It was pretty funny, enough to make you at least smile. It was a good length, without grammatical faults or misspellings. Not much ...

Well about the abused commas, I just like making a sentence that way. But I'll think about that next time xD

Sorry, my first language isn't English and this was my first story on this website. About the capitalization, somehow when I write on this site it does it automatically. The ...

Shape and size does not matter!!! It's what's on the inside that matters, and you seem like a great and talented person!!!! Let those Girls be thin and popular, it's ...

I Think the story is intressting, with the small Town and the lovetriangle. However, the languge is fairly simple and would need a bit more working with. However, in some ...