Yatta!

My friend, that WAS poetry because if that was a story, I'd be critiquing you like there were no tomorrow. It was lovely. So lovely. I liked it a lot. ...

It's good. I can't say I liked it, it's not personally my cup of tea, but I won't knock the fact that its a promising good work of poetry. Now ...

Honestly, I don't know why I read this poem. I guess it was out of curiousity, ha ha. But, hey, no worries, don't regret posting it, I was laughing my ...

It was brilliant, I loved it! But some critique. The last stanza is a bit...ahh overwhelming, for a better word for it. Try smoothing it out a bit and making ...

On a mean note: Take out "Newsflash" It's overwhelmingly childish and it makes you seem like a spoiled brat on a Disney movie. If you want to be taken seriously, ...

I liked it. It seemed like parts of this poem weren't unified. I didn't grasp the entire concept of the poem, I did get each little segment, but, to me,together ...

Uh, that's one hell of a dream you got there. Sorry, I think it a bit surreal that Jesus would have a gun and blast your mirror to pieces for ...

Are all evils inherent, as something waiting innate? Or be wickedness a skill, As something learnt by free will? Comment: Yeah, I like this start off. Very nice. Personally, the ...

Put a period in there. You seemed to just be rambling on with commas like that little kid on the Incredibles that's like "and then...and then...and then..." Otherwise, I do ...

I think it's very important for your audience to understand a poem. If this poem is just for yourself, it's fabulous. I wouldn't change a thing. I actually like the ...

No: Is this story supposed to carry similarities to Underworld? Nevertheless, there were a lot of grammatical errors and a lot of places where it was hard to understand what ...

Cute summary. Reminded me of Star Wars, so I guess that can't be bad. I'm usually not into Science Fiction like this, but it has potential I think. Can't want ...

I liked it. Then again, I have a thing for anything psychotic. Perceptive and introverted is the way to do it.If He gets caught, it will be worth watching someone ...

“NO!” She shook the mouse on her computer and shied away when the blinding white background Uh, what? I didn't get that. "when the blinding white background"...what? I liked it ...

You said critique it, so that's what I am going to do... I cry in the dark so you can't see the constant tears, Dress up in black to help ...