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an English assignment based of the book Night by Ellie Weisel Lost Soul The little sad eyed angel , Hung at the crossroads Between life and death. We looked him ...

No he doesn't need to do any editing! Don't you get it? The mistakes are part of the poem. You can still read it and understand it even though its ...

This is a very sad but sweet poem. There were a few spots where you seemed to change tense or the rhyming became a little forced, but over all I ...

Trembling, I stand at the castle door. I think of my past, my eyes fill with gore. I'm not sure I understand how your eyes could be filled with gore. ...