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i really enjoyed this poem. I can really connect to the person, experiencing the 'emotional' storm. "My tears are falling like rain." i loved this line because the similie was ...

Kyllorac, to be honest i didn't like this. i don't want to sound mean, but to me it was like four lines about some random needing to pee. Whether you ...

Good start. You're writing is clear and easy to follow which is good I'm looking forward to reading more, and by the way i love the title, i can already ...

good