Xena

ye ye ye i dont get whats acctually going on here... like.. are they singers.. are they ballarina/singers like in a circus or something.. and why cant they go bowling ...

ahh... it was a bit long but i huffed and giggled at some parts... i liked how it all connected to the true history of the universe and earth and ...

so this is true you say.. and you showed this to your friend and she said.. brilliant great.. shit.. id be like.. damn. this is how you think of me. ...

so.. this is in the future.. where time dosnt need to be kept track of? why not? what happend? theres a type of peace in the world? thats kool, who ...

this guy is a samarai right? so dont listen anything complicated said about speaking.. how does he know how samarais speak? i bet they do speak like yoda, arnt they ...

hummmum.. yea the grammar was a bit off, misplaced commas adn such.. like the ending.. no commas needed... but i think that one person up there probably corrected everything... witha ...

this was pretty good for what it was.. but short? eh.. ridickuslosly short? noo.. a few grammitical errors here and there ... no biggies.. in fact im not even sure ...