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Thanks for your review and your advice i'll edit this in a few days :) and I do plan to write on :D

Thanks for your review,When you say you like how i portrayed the emotions what kind of emotions do you think or do you know they are?

Thanks for your review and i'll edit 'Brown Eyes' in a few days :)

Thank you for your review and i'll be sure to take your advice but i will get to it in a few days :)

Anytime

I absolutely adore this poem how you described it was really well and i didn't see any bad Grammar.

This is really sweet.Got a little bit teary eyed thou.But overall a very short and sweet poem