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Wynnyr

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Where am I going?

    I liked it. It did seem a bit choppy there in the middle, like you didn't know what train of thought to follow, but that might be the way you ...

    Dec 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Heroin

    I liked the repetition, but I thing more detail is needed. The pain of the person speaking isn't clearly illustrated, and in poems dealing with something this personal the pain ...

    Dec 7, 2008


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