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Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
hi I have added a different option for the prologue, please let me know which you prefer!
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
hi I have added a different option for the prologue, please let me know which you prefer!
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
hi I have added a different option for the prologue, please let me know which you prefer!
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
hi I have added a different option for the prologue, please let me know which you prefer!
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 2.
I have found this description of a prologue online :) What is a prologue? A prologue is used to give readers extra information that advances the plot. It is included ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
Thank you very much for your corrections, I've been writing this super speedy for nanowrimo, and decided to not read any of it back so I could keep going!
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 2.
Hi, chapter name was a fuck up my bad. I'm aware a prologue usually takes place before but I'm doing it differently in this, If I hadn't called it a ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: The Princess Who Would Not Sleep
BTW, hedgewitch is often used as one word and not separated, especially by hedgewitches themselves. not sure the 'correct' spelling but both are used the same amount
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Prologue (please tell me the option you prefer)
Its set in the middle of the book! thank you for your comments!
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Riddle
Aww and im usually so crappy at riddles! yay!
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Riddle
fire i'm guessing, due to the smoke signal and forest fire references? lovely though
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 3
Anyone else from these parts? I live in Bath so I know Bristol well. But on the off chance anyone here hails from Frome/Shepton Mallet is there anything you can ...
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Re: Minds in Communion
Really a good piece, I want to know when you add more to it
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Minds in Communion
I think in a lot of places where you appear to swap tense I read it first as a typo, but also word does not always catch everythin
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Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties
Yes I got that, it just seems you could have chosen a better subject, now you've explained it all I appreciate it a lot more as a piece of satire, ...
Nov 10, 2014
