WritingWolf

I see... Also, do you think that changing "to be a signal to all" to "as a signal to all" would help with the choppiness?

Thank you for the lovely review! Do you have any specific advice for how I could intertwine the two ideas more?

The e isn't random. That's what the entire poem is about. You will notice that that is the only place where E appears in the poem. (there were several places ...

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks for the input. :) But I intentionally capitalized every line because that's a technique used to make the first word of the line sound more important (kinda like how ...

I'm glad I could help. :) As for the last line maybe you could just change "underdevelopment" to another word that anyone can relate to? Like "depression" or "sadness" or ...

You're welcome. I hope it helped. :)

Thank you. :) Actually, I once had heard a version where at the end the Big Bad Wolf ate her whole, and then a knight came a killed the wolf ...

Thanks for the review. :)

Thanks for the review. :) How is it I knew someone would suggest putting a rhyme to it? I guess I should, just for practice. I tend to struggle with ...

O.O Uhh.. Trimeter? Pentameter? Metric? Apparently the first half of this poem achieved something I hadn't been aiming for. I will have to do some research and figure out what ...

You do? I suppose people in different places speak differently. But from what I've heard (both around me and in literature) it's not a particularly common phrasing. Usually only used ...

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I repeated "mouth" and "routh" because they were at the end of the lines I was supposed to repeat. Remember, this is a villanelle. The first and last lines of ...

Thank you. :D