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Re: A Line.
I really like this poem. I think it is really emotional and a very interesting way of viewing things. I liked the way you rhymed certain things, yet it's still ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: 1
I love this poem. You perfectly captured the pain of having cut in the past, and how the future is yours after moving past it. Depression is painful and excruciating, ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet: What is there to Say?
I thought you had a lot of great content and feeling in this poem! A sonnet, however, is typically written in four stanzas of four lines (quatrain), and one stanza ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: "Let it Load"
This was a great parody! I thought it was creative, humorous, and followed along with the tune of the song perfectly. I think when you write parodies, you may have ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Time
First off, your poem is great, and I can really picture your feelings towards your love. This poem is great, so this is just a few minor ideas. So, one ...
Jun 19, 2014
