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Hey there foxfire! I'm WD, pleased to meet you. :wink: You have an interesting start here, and I'd like to see where this story goes, but I'd like to address ...

Hey Sachi! This is really very lovely. :D You have a simplistic but beautiful style and it works magic in this story. Despite the reliance on dialogue, you have a ...

Hey there Kate! Tis WD! You have an interesting piece here and I think it has some potential, but there are a few things I think you can do to ...

Hey there pandacary! Welcome to YWS! I'm WD and it's lovely to meet you. I just wanted to give you a few pointers on some of the things that have ...

Hey there infinite reality! I'm glad I got around to reading this! I think I'm just going to pick out some parts of this as I go and then sum ...

Look who got around to this! :D Can I just say that I had a whole lot of fun reading this? You know I love your writing style. Your prose ...

Hey zerkk! I said I would get around to this after November so here I am. :) You have quite a lot of good reviews here, so I'll second what ...

Hey infinite reality! Told you I would get around to looking at the new addition to this after November. :wink: All right, the stuff in my previous review was about ...

Hey there Kamas! So... I do believe I have warned you that I have not reviewed poetry in a very long time, but, at your request, I am glad to ...

Hey there joshuapaul! Tis WD again. Glad to see you're dabbling in some new genres. :wink: As has been said, you write very well. You have a very good grasp ...

Hey TigerShaard! This is WD. This is an interesting story; by the title, it seems to suggest fantastical elements, but you seems to deliberately include details that ground the reader ...

Hey there TheWriters! I'm WD and first, I would like to welcome you to YWS! Glad to see a new face in this section. This was an interesting idea, you ...

Hey there napalmerski! I'm WD and I enjoyed reading this story. The ideas you have here are intriguing. You did a lovely job of setting up your world and I, ...

Hey Jig! A very lovely piece you have here. Your style is refreshing and most of your word choice fit perfectly. I am quite fond of your style. This was ...

Hey there infinite reality! I got here sooner than expected. :wink: This was, indeed, much better than chapter 2. You're grasping the way your sentences sound and it's working wonders ...