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Re: Origins of a Queen
This is interesting, Elinor! WD, here as requested. :wink: I'm very interested to see where this story is going--this is a very eventful beginning and that can work well for ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Janitors - Chapter 1 (Final Edit)
Hey there NewHero! Tis WD, as requested. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. Anyways, you already have a lot of great comments about this, so I ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Death Penalty (16+ for Semi-Graphic Descriptions)
This is a very old essay that I doubt the author still wants advice on, so I'm going to lock this. Also, remember Non-fiction is a forum for helping people ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted
Hey there Kanen! WD here, as requested! I'm glad I got around to reading this--you have some interesting ideas here and a lot of promise in this character. It sounds ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Rentre ?? la Maison: Come Home
Hey there Evi! WD, as requested. Sorry it took me so long to get to this! This is really very lovely. I've read it a few times over and every ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Questions in the Dark
Hey there Valentine! WD here. Sorry it took me so long to get to this. :wink: All right! I really like this idea; you have some wonderful things going on ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Little Missy
Hi there pudin! WD here, as requested. I am a little rusty critiquing poetry, as I don't really write it anymore, but I will do my best to help you ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: A Seasonal Answer
Hey there Gal! Tis WD, as requested. I believe I have warned you, I am very rusty at critiquing poetry, but I will help however I can with this, though ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: The River That Weeps (Edited and refurbished!)
Hey there Olli! Great to see you around and posting! Tis WD! So, I really like your title--it is what initially drew me in, so nice job with that! You ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Small Steps
Hey there flute! Tis WD, as requested! :wink: So, I thought this was pretty nice! I liked the simple style you used here and many of your sentences struck close ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: sci-fi story feedback needed
Hey there teevee! Tis WD, here to review for you! So, I enjoyed reading this. You have a very distinct writing style that I enjoy. You seem to have a ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Heaven and Hell (not fixed title)
Hey there Carly! Tis WD! I'm glad I got to read this. This beginning has a lot of potential. As has been mentioned, the girl out in the hallway really ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Removed
Hey there, Elinor! Tis WD, as requested! Anyways, first, I'd like to say that I like the name Dinah. It's pretty, and you have some good ideas flowing here. You ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: How it Feels to Drown
Hey, Kamas! :wink: So... I couldn't stay away. Homework will fall by the wayside until I review this. This was very cool! You are very brave to experiment with something ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: The Twin guardians
Hai there! WD here, sorry it took me so long. All right. I really like this. I have a huge weakness for elaborate narrators who take joy in telling their ...
Jan 20, 2010