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Thank you for the review. it helps me more and more get better and make the story as good as it can get. I will go and fix those {you ...

thank you this is a very good review and i will try and use more description and more vocabulary. I see your points and will try my best to fix ...

This is beautiful and nothing is wrong with it. I love reading your writing. Please keep posting so I can read more.

:) thank you haha

it is all fixed. thank you so much for making me a better writer by pointing out my mistakes and errors. It is way better and if you would like ...

It is all fixed and better thanks to you. If you would like you could reread it and enjoy it more haha,

thank you again for your review! i apriciate your time to review and make me a better writer. I will go through and fix them now. I didn't notice i ...

thank you for your input and errors I will go fix those now ^.^

If you loved how emotional it was and you loved it the way it was I have worked on a few things and changed it a little giving you more ...

I have changed a few things around and if you would like you could reread it to see how it has improved thanks to you and other reviews.

i have fixed the story the best I could and used your points and tips. If you would like to reread it and see how your influence helped please feel ...

wow lots of time to write i guess haha. First, Sawyer is a girl. second, you made some really great pointers about how i should shorten things here and lengthen ...

Thank you for these. they are so helpful and I am going through and fixing them right now! ^.^

thanks you to :)

thank you so much and I will post the second chapter as soon as I have enough points but it will be soon! I love when people review my story ...