Wranna

This poem really was amazing. I really like how the last four lines had a different rhyme scheme, but maybe if those four lines were seperate from the rest, if ...

I really liked it, however at first I thought you were writing in third person so when the end came along I was confused. If this is a create your ...

I really liked this, although when he was reminiscing about how he and Elizabeth met I would have liked it if he got more in detail about how they met ...