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Re: We all believe in something... (Cassie)
You made me cry... I don't have much to say. This is a really good story. The only thing I'd point out would be: I felt the hand of God ...
Jun 1, 2010 -
Re: My first cover!
That's awesome! I'd like to wonder, as everyone else does, did you take that? Could you do a cover for my book? Do you do werewolves? Oh, and grammer freak ...
May 31, 2010 -
Re: The Wolf Pack Ch 1 + part 1-2 of ch 2 edited.
Hey Leth, Sorry I didn't get this review done until now. This is a really good story, and there aren't many mistakes. This one sentence was really weird though. "Promise ...
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: Wanderlust (1) - What Big Brother Left
Hawkie, are you trying to make me cry? *SNIIIFFFLE* cause it's working! I know the grandma was old, but did she HAVE to die? just a few things: "I'm here, ...
Oct 6, 2009 -
Re: A Dangerous Dream
I would have to agree with everyone else. I got to the end, and I was thinking, "What?? that's IT??" I didn't particularly like how it started out with explaining ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Burning Past (makeshift title) A Short Story...
Lovely story, Bop! I especially liked the first paragraph. Very terrifying. I really liked the star, it made me think it was either God, or Harold. I was wondering who ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
You did a good job at the beginning, and I know it's a parody, but you really had more swearing than necessary. In fact I couldn't finish due to the ...
Jun 30, 2009
