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Re: Thirteenth hour chaprter 1 part 2
Hi! I have to admit, i've always held a fondness towards dragons and i finally, after hemming and hawing, started my own dragon story ;) I loved your dragon, was ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: The Cobra-Chapter One
Hi! Congratulations, your characters are actually human! one of the only obvious typo's i found - Somebody knelt down beside her and a warm hand was rested on her shoulder. ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Introduction - please give feedback
Hiya!This was well written and i really could sympathize with her, lol, i know alot of kids like her actually and how she feels, so bravo to you for making ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Fledgling: a Short Story Pt. 1/2
Awesome! I have actually found quite a few stories i liked tonight..hmmm. I loved the griffins personality and their relationship, i loved he ending and it was all just very ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Heaven and Hell (Introduction)
Interesting! I do love a good angel and demon story! I agree, outlines can save your butt when you run out of ideas! Notebooks and powerpoints are what i use! ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: White Demons Prologue
Hi! I have to say, this was interesting to me, despite the shortness (at least it wasn't a terribly long epic lol) I love the name Alice, i love the ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: -deleted-
The title is what drew me in! I adored it, to be completely honest. I am a paranormal lover, i have read and watched a libraries worth of stuff on ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: love of the game
Hi! I truly believe this story has a lot of potential, just slow up a bit, i was like, whoa, already over? Describe the school, the people around her, her ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: DragonsShifter Chapter 1(OMG I love Dragons!!)
Hi! I really enjoyed this, lol, i love dragons too, actually i wrote a novel about them when i was your age. I mean, it was terrible, a lot of ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Story I am working on
This was very intriguing! when i figured out she was trying to commit suicide i was like :O lol. I loved her sisters character ;) , maybe because she reminded ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Freeflier: The Great Defender (Chapter One)
This was a very interesting story! I agree with the above post, lol, i am a sucker for animal stories, its true, so of course i loved this story! swiftsoar ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: Tara chapter one *Part one rewrite*
I liked it! Of course, this is my type of novel! Female warriors, sword wielding heroine's = awesomeness! My only advice would be to maybe explain a little better, hint ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: The Spring of Life (I'm Still Here)
Amazing! Amazing description, amazing story, i just loved it and its dictionary of words! I had a problem a couple years ago where i would throw completely useless words into ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Serial Killer
Hi! Okay, question, have you read Darkly Dreaming Dexter or seen it on TV(simply 'Dexter' on TV)? Very similar thing here, serial killer killing bad guys, obsessed with blood, and ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Alzina Adalwolf
Hey! long time no see! As usual, i love your writing, and you've gotten so much better! Didn't think it possible, with how well you wrote before ;) Catchy name ...
Sep 5, 2010
