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excerpt- need critique- very rough
hi! this is a excerpt from my work in progress, well, no, more like a work in idle, but you get the idea. (names are not decided yet) Swallowing a ...
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untitled- this piece needs critique! very badly!
this is a idea that sprung from Meh head when i was pondering my story, i know it isn't very good, but that's what your for isn't it, to give ...
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bigger meanings - prologue
This is the beggining to my story I need to know what you think about it so i can better it. Thanks in advance!
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thought it might help . . . .
hey, some of you have probably seen my prologue "bigger meanings". to help you visulize jensey, i decided to post the first decription i have of her. my book is ...
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might die, yeah so what?
Hey! wolf here, this is a part of my novel! i know you people dont like pieces of stories all to much, but this one was just so fun to ...
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chap. 1 part 1 of (name pending)
ok, hey, it took me forever to work up the courage to post this, it is the actual story to my prologue BIGGER MEANINGS. i am really nervous but it ...
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its finally here!
okay, this is the second part of my first chapter, oh gosh, i am terified to post! never gets easier! sorry about the font and stuff, it doesnt show up ...