Wolf_Link95

This was really good, i liked the rhythm and the lyrics (i understand the quotes), although the rhythm was dodgy in some places. Without a re-bel-lion, But overall it was ...

She whistled loudly, looking around for a flutter of wings. Ellima whistled again, whispering ‘Ario’. (End of Part One) i like the idea how the bird comes when she whistles ...

i loved this poem i also think it was a good idea with the opening being the same as the ending, i found this poem is very readable i have ...