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Alphess: part one [revised as of 2008/03/11]
When reviewing, please keep in mind that this is only an excerpt. Some things may seem unclear, but that is [mostly] because this is from the middle of the story. ...
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runaway revisited - an exert.
Okay, so the whole plot of R U N A W A Y is changing, and I decided that I didn't want to start writing it at the beginning. I ...
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Life (for school, need reviews ASAP please)
Okay, so this is a school assignement that's due really soon ... the teacher gave us starters like 'life is a' and then our friends picked words for us and ...
