WinnyWriter

As always, thanks for the review. And yes, I was aiming for a hypoglycemia type of condition, so I'm glad that translated easily to you. :)

Thanks for your comments.:)

Thanks, I always appreciate comments and feedback!

Thanks for your review & constructive criticism!

Hey, there! I'm not going to set this as a review, as I'm simply just responding, and therefore don't feel it would be quite right to aim for the review ...

Thanks! I always appreciate people taking time to review my chapters.

These are all so cute!

Hey, and thanks for the review once again! And thanks for pointing out the confusing spots. They 'they' in the first comment was referring to the gates. Maybe I should ...

Thanks so much for your in-depth reviews!

Noted. Well, you'll see what's coming up . . . . :)

Thanks for your review! To respond to a couple of your comments: first, the reason Altha had the poison is mostly explained in Part 4.0, which you may have missed, ...

Once again, thanks so much for the helpful reviews! I really appreciate you pointing out what does or doesn't work.

Thanks for the review. :) You aren't missing any pieces of backstory. I am wanting to include more insight in that area, but I just haven't found the right place ...

Thanks again for the review! I appreciate you taking time to work through this story. :) Also, yes, this is part of the previous section. I'm basically breaking up my ...

Thanks so much for the comments!