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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: It's all her

    She's a beautiful girl And she lives in a fantasy It's her little world And it's realer Is "realer" a word? if it is i think its spelt wrong. than ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Breaking Dawn add on

    I read this out at a young writers open mic... i was very nervous lol. enjoy. ;) I smelt freshly cut grass by the forest, and the smell of blood ...

    Aug 31, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: untitled- this piece needs critique! very badly!

    Wow, i know deep inside this has a good plotline but you really need to work on this and make it clearer, it confused me i know the girl was ...

    Aug 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: 2012: The year of Armageddon

    Ok first of, Hi There wasn't really muth detail, and you switched tenses alot in the first paragraph. My home is a playground for the unstable. first line, your making ...

    Aug 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Library Love Games (The Novel ch.1)

    ErrmmmmWOW your really good, theres nothing to point out...keep writing funny think is aswell my crush has the exact same name! but its just Luke not Lucas :) PM me ...

    Jul 27, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Doctor Who

    Ding Dong Russell rose from his chair as his doorbell rung, slowly walking backwards towards the door while keeping his eyes firmly planted on the breaking news report showing on ...

    Jul 27, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Blood Red

    It happened again. I woke up in a hot sweat that drenched my body, plastering my hair to my head. The dream. i think i would sound cool if you ...

    Jul 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Fearless

    Well, this is a product of me being a hopeless romantic and listening to too much Taylor Swift. Rated 12+ for one use of bad language. Criticism is muchly muchly ...

    Jul 24, 2010


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