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Re: It's all her
She's a beautiful girl And she lives in a fantasy It's her little world And it's realer Is "realer" a word? if it is i think its spelt wrong. than ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Breaking Dawn add on
I read this out at a young writers open mic... i was very nervous lol. enjoy. ;) I smelt freshly cut grass by the forest, and the smell of blood ...
Aug 31, 2010 -
Re: untitled- this piece needs critique! very badly!
Wow, i know deep inside this has a good plotline but you really need to work on this and make it clearer, it confused me i know the girl was ...
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: 2012: The year of Armageddon
Ok first of, Hi There wasn't really muth detail, and you switched tenses alot in the first paragraph. My home is a playground for the unstable. first line, your making ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Library Love Games (The Novel ch.1)
ErrmmmmWOW your really good, theres nothing to point out...keep writing funny think is aswell my crush has the exact same name! but its just Luke not Lucas :) PM me ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Doctor Who
Ding Dong Russell rose from his chair as his doorbell rung, slowly walking backwards towards the door while keeping his eyes firmly planted on the breaking news report showing on ...
Jul 27, 2010 -
Re: Blood Red
It happened again. I woke up in a hot sweat that drenched my body, plastering my hair to my head. The dream. i think i would sound cool if you ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Fearless
Well, this is a product of me being a hopeless romantic and listening to too much Taylor Swift. Rated 12+ for one use of bad language. Criticism is muchly muchly ...
Jul 24, 2010
