WillowPaw1

Hello there! Queerelves pointed out most stuff, so I'll just be saying my opinion. :) First off, quick and easy change in the title: Right now it's "Science Fiction come ...

Hello! WillowPaw1 here to review. As usual, nitpicks first: 2. Across the street there is a pedophile guy who likes kids a creep. Take out the second "a". “Lets see ...

Hi there! Short review from me! ;) Wow, so I like how you wrote a cliché story, but this character said it was a cliché as well. Brilliant. :) So ...

Hey there! Okay, so wow. I found no nitpicks, this was really edited pretty well. I'll start with my criticism (which hopefully won't be harsh). So I noticed in the ...

Willow here to review! Wow, what a plot. I don't know much about batman — just enough that I know of Robin and the Joker. I'm going to start with ...

Willow here to review! ;) Ah, yes, the wifi going down. What a tragedy. :( I liked this poem, a lot. It had it's own creative spark of humor to ...

Hey! I'm going to write a short review for you. :) I love how this is a riddle yet it has rhyming to it. You don't know how much I ...

Well, guess who it is. Personally, I didn't like this one as much as the others of yours I have read. I don't know why, it just didn't click me ...

Willow here for a review! :D Again! This is a short one. Okay, so yeah, I usually start with nitpicks, but hey! What do you know? I found none. Now ...

Okay. Woah. Creepy. Suuuperr creepy. Anyways! Let's get onto the review! I only spotted one error, and that was: There was five girls staring back at her. I'm pretty sure ...

Hey there! :) I'll do nitpicks first. I just wanna see how it looks like in real life, not internet? After not there should be a word, either "from" or ...

Hello there! WillowPaw here to review! I'll do nitpicks first. Ah my mom, she was such a paranoid lady of 45. Comma after "ah" and I think you should writer ...

Hey! :) Okay, so Dragon and Iggy pretty much mentioned most things ... But now it's my turn to state my opinion! I'll start with the one nitpick I found. ...

Hey! Willow here to review! :) This is getting good so far! I'm going to start with nitpicks: Did you want to come here, or were you forced.” No need ...

Willow here to review this chapter. Wow, I actually thought she was being tortured. 0.0 You really got me hooked there. I love the description in here. Especially this line: ...