Willow

I noticed some of the changes you made and they are better, but I still feel that you can add a lot more detail and description, especially where the characters ...

I agree with dianis, you have a good hook and you keep the reader wondering, but maybe a little too much. Add some more description and focus on detail. Try ...

First of all, the ghastly stuff is cool and necessary if you're writing crime fiction, so don't worry about it This stoy is well writeen and you create a good ...

I haven't read Da Vinci code yet, but i'd like to. There are loads of theories ging around over here. Mothers and some overly supersticious fathers are banning their children ...

I'm gonna borrow All American Girl on Wednesday from my firend (money probs). I read the first two chapters in class and have been dying to read the rest. I ...

This was great. The descriptions are excellent and as lin night said they draw you in. I would just like to know a bit more about the character, and her ...

I think it was great. Your description is very good, and the story is interesting. I think i spotted a few typos, but it could just be me. {rubs eyes ...