WilliamPaige

Thank you so much for the review I will definitely take your notes into consideration, especially about the pacing, dialogue and commas (I have a habit of chucking them wherever ...

Oh yay!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed my writing!! I'm working towards posting a couple more chapters (not in any particular order) and I would be thrilled to see you ...

Thank you for your review! I appreciate the detail, it was definitely not too harsh. I'll take what you said into consideration! I would like to clarify some pieces though ...

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Thank you so much for the review and the answers, I greatly appreciate it all!! I hope you have a wonderful day!

Thank you so much for the review! First, I see how that could be confusing and that is entirely my mistake. See, the original play for the argument had many ...

Thank you so much for the review! I really love that you mentioned the character not being human, which is partially true, which is why I love you picked up ...

This is my first novel, and though it has a long way to come, me and my coauthor would love some feed back. I appreciate all the support that this ...

As a lover of satire, this is fantastic! The humor is on point and truly highlights the playfulness of the poem. Another great thing about this poem is the shape. ...

This is a very powerful poem. I noticed the use of lowercase letters, it almost make the reader feel small, yet they put a focus on "i". The destruction of ...