Willard

At least you did something constructive, unlike others who just beat down on me. Still, the dialogue clearly states what's going on. It really doesn't help me when people don't ...

I didn't mean to come off as a jerk, but the whole reason why is said in the dialogue. Also, there is a sequel which will make more sense. If ...

No.

How about no editing? It's called understanding dialogue, which is clear that didn't happen

The main character is the governor, and shows how destructive he is. No, I don't need quotations. Ever read Cormac Mccarthy? No? Exactly. Its a lot easier. Thanks for the ...

Point=misunderstood. Thanks for the review!

I just used the initials from their first names

Why would I give up? No, I'm not going to keep working on this. Its going to be a serial

Gonna put this out here, I love the way how you used the lyrics

What was that? Oh yeah, maybe if you had a sense of what this work means you'll get it

Beautiful.

You leave as this guy is a MODERN GENIUS

I guess, I wouldn't count this as a review.

So? Also, thanks (No sarcasm)

Thanks :D