Wiggy

Aww...how sweet Liz! Keep writing! I'm such a fluffy romantic too. This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. :D

C'mon-everyone posts their work on here with the chance of it being liked or not liked. And besides, you'll prolly have such a variation of opinions plus you can get ...

Please please please continue! What happens between Leo and Christy?

Does anyone know if this story would be good for the magazine THEMA? That's the magazine I'm submitting it to, and if anyone's ever read it before, could they give ...

Does anyone know of any good magazines this could be submitted to?

Wow guys! Thanks so much for all your help! I'm definitely going to use those crits. Expect more soon! Wiggy ;)

This was a really nice piece. Crysi did a great crit, so I won't bother repeating what she said. Romantic fiction can be stupid or great, and this was great ...

Grif covered what I wanted to say...nice job!

This had beautiful language and imagery-but I'm confused. I love your poems, gummy, but sometimes I just can't figure them out. Nice job though!

Dreamy, you just made my day! Thanks-I'll use your suggestions. You rock! :grin:

Wow MH-thanks for that crit! There's way more to come, don't worry. I'm working on this story for a magazine called THEMA and I want to get as many crits ...

Yes, long awaited story is here :grin:. DD has been pestering me to post it, so I did. I personally don't think it's that great (compared to all the other ...

Thanks chevy! That's a good idea for combining lines. Thanks! :D

Thanks Jack-I'll work on it. :D

I modified it according to crits on TSR and YWS. Tell me what you think of the new one!