Whitlinger

Hi Steggy, Thank you so much for reviewing my work. Yes, I've always felt frustrated by the beginning of this chapter because it seems to lack flow. I enjoyed writing ...

No problem, it was a pleasure reading this. Your dialogue works very well. :) Regarding mystery, you did a nice job dropping hints about who Jyden is and his past ...

Hey Pan, thanks for taking the time to review. You're right, the description is only there for the sake of it. I absolutely love writing sensory detail, and I just ...