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Re: All is Not What It Seems
"To be honest, I would scrap it almost entirely and start again." Okay, I will. I'm not getting anything good about it so I'll trash it if its this bad.
May 11, 2009 -
Re: An "Ode" to Whaling
You did, peanutgallery! Thanks, I'll do that!
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: An "Ode" to Whaling
Thanks! I had a feeling I got the pl english wrong. I'll take your advice
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Back to the place
I agree with requiemjaysus, I really like the idea of the dreaming and the cement and all. But it kind of seems like it needs more...
Apr 24, 2009