Wesley

Great message behind this breaking out of the class system. I thnk the rythm needs some work cause I couldn't find one but this is an awesome poem a little ...

This poem gives a reader mixed feelings. It had a good flow for the Alone in the darkness, Without a light in sight, Melancholy threatened to swallow me whole. I ...

This is a beautiful poem! I really like it! I think that this paints the best picture of the tender care of the soft Autumn breeze. Very descriptive literal words. ...

Yes it is sorta creepy and dark very weird. You see his heart in a different way. But I don't think it is poetry. No rythm No flow but props ...

The over all story was good. It leaves you wanting to know the rest of the story. Her eyes glistened with the reflection of the morning sun as it rose ...

Nice! this is the first i've seen you write that was cool i think it should be in the sci-fi section but i thought it was good. a little confusing ...

Again you rock! This is one of the best peices of lit I've read. The plot leaves you on the edge in suspense and the characters come to life. The ...