WebzTycoon

Do you like to read? I like to read. I love reading! Reading is one of my favorite passions. I like cozieing up next to a fire in the middle ...

Ohhh, this is good. I can't wait for more! :) Please update me on my wall when you've updated your story! :)

I'm not sure how to review a review. Good job? :3

However, don't give up :) All it takes is practice. I'm not saying I'm the worlds greatest writer either. :)

This is okay, however, I feel as though it's a little short, and it doesn't really feel that meaningful. I guess that nuclear war isn't that meaningful in general, but ...

You hide yourself in your own illusions, Believing your man made delusions, You use your thoughts and words – unknowingly so as weapons at war with other ideals to try ...

Okay, don't get me wrong, I love your story that you are presenting to us. However, I found many grammatical errors and contredicting descriptions. Just read the first paragraph again. ...

I can't say anything, but WOW! I wish I was as good a writer as you! Oh my god, wow! That was absolutely brilliant! It reminded my of reading a ...

Remarkable. Short but sweet. :) I like it. Keep writing!

"Removed by the Author."

I think your poems good. :) There were some things that bugged me about it though. One was that is seemed as though the stanza were too short. Life, before ...

I don't know what to say. This is a phenominal poem you've written here. :) I think it's perfect. Wow! You've written something great here. :) I like your wording, ...

I agree with PollarBear 14. But after all, practice makes perfect. :) The more you write, the better you'll get at it.

I like it. Keep writing :)

Wow! That was really good! I enjopyed reading it! Keep writing!