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Rain
Please give me the best reviews you can. Also, please include your opinions. I'd like to get some feedback on the grammar and mechanics, but also content and story-wise. Enjoy! ...
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Rain - revised
I used the comments I recieved and made some changes. Tell me how you like it. It is has highly graphic...imagery, though, so proceed with caution. Night hung thickly, like ...
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The Tides of Man
The wealth of time That will stir and grow Is greater than Any man can know. For all his words, He shall never sieze Or grasp all 'Life's Oppurtunites. The ...
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A Heart's Deluge
(To that one girl, whose heart I've yet to win...) You once said to me you wish to lead A life of love and simplicity. All of these things I ...
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Rainy Window
I can only hear a soft, sifting melody-- I do not hear the rain. It plays for long and sets me free To hear the quiet song again. Dripping leaves ...
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Waiting
He waits For life to turn sweet again And the silent somber shadow Of Despair sticks to his thoughts, Which is why He waits She hides Away from his stolid ...
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Our Lost Autumn
The beacons lit, the fire spreads Into the hearts of many. An impossible glow that fills our heads; It's warmth is quite uncanny. The soft and chilling breeze Draws our ...
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I Love You
I know you'll never read this. I know that I'll probably never tell you anything I write here. But right now, I find myself in need of a catharsis. Autumn ...
