Wcatgal

Everyone's really pointed out everything that needed work, so there's not much I can tell you. Overall I really liked the story. I loved the prologue! I really look forward ...

Thanks for you review ^_^ I'll be sure to PM you as well when I post the next chapter. I'll definitley critique your first post.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I was able to surprise you ^_^ I will definitely PM you when I post more of the chapters.

Thanks for your helpful suggestions!

Thanks for all your acvice! it really helps me understand what I need to do to make the story better. To answer your question mikedb1492 shanghai is the name of ...