Wayland

I this that your writing is very good. I like your style, its easy to read. But it feels like I'm reading a random part of book in the middle ...

Wow. That was really funny. My sister would really appreciate the clown being beat up. She literally has clorophobia. It hilarious:) The only thing i would suggest is maybe have ...

That was awesome. I had abosolutely no idea what it was leading to then when I came to the end I just started laughing, It was such an intense poem ...

I really liked this. I love your writing style. It's smooth but exciting and easy to follow. I only have a couple things to critique. First is the tense. In ...

First Off, I really like your writing voice and the plot. I think you could go very far with it. I like the idea of a vampire jury. I do ...

I love it! It flows really nice and I like the voice. Please keep writing it:) the only thing I would suggest is that you make some of the scenes ...

I really like the idea for the story but your going to fast without explaining things. For example are they angels? Like the girl and her friends? Did she meet ...