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Warlord

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Belinda Cabbotry: The Weak and the Wary (PART 6)

    hey warlord here. you sure are good in sequels . awesome story and mentains the standard of the previous parts. it surely gives a view of what its like being ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: .

    ding ding ding Warlord here for review. Hey you write great .now youve got a awesome serious imagination .The plot is greate ,the mafia , his son ,the murder,sister all ...

    Jun 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ignis ch1

    hey Warlord here for review . good story i must say ,i believe that next chapters of this story will also turn out to be as good and even better. ...

    Jun 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Identites

    Hey Warlord here for review! You started pretty good and ended it even better ,compliments for that. now here are your mistakes ,first of all “Why am I here,” I ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: ​Life’s After-Party

    O.k a new idea and i appreciate it.first part was good you explained what was necessary nothing else was needed.But i think you kept the accident part too dull it ...

    May 1, 2014
  • Script » Theatre, Humor Re: Mr. Homoh Hernaldez

    well it is humorous man . I dont know how you guys come up with such ideas. the situation you created with a simple name is really cool. but you ...

    May 1, 2014


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