Wariofart

Hey! I don't usually review poetry, but I'll try, since I think your idea is really sweet! Go Matt! Your idea and message is great. I can tell you really ...

Hey! Luke here with a review. First, I'm gonna do my nitpicks, then do an overall. NITPICKS: "Her beaten and worn body holds shallow breaths." I feel like this description ...

Hey! I thought this was a good piece, especially for your age. You write very smoothly and everything flows amazingly, which is really great to see. I'll start off with ...

Wow, this was actually really, really good. Your description and prose was very interesting and elegant to read, and I usually dislike stories about royalty. In the small space of ...

Nitpicks A shout from the distance pulled mine and the attacker’s attention out of our battle and to the approaching man. The bold part sounds awkward. Maybe re-write it as ...

Hi, wariofart here for a review. Let's get right down to it. General: Overall, I really liked the start of the book. You grabbed me from the beginning and had ...

I really enjoyed this song. Even though I don't know the tune, the chorus seems like it could be really catchy. The topic of this is pretty cliche (boy meets ...

Well, this was definitely interesting. Quite original... I'm still trying to wrap my head around this, but I'm pretty sure I like it. I'm not going to nit-pick, because with ...

I really like the idea of the story. I love to people watch too, so reading how Simon perceived people was interesting. He really is an interesting character. You also ...

Whoot, another contest entry! I love them so :D So this piece was pretty good. Grammar-wise, there were some mistakes. Story-wise, I felt the end happened way too quickly. At ...

Wow, this was a really good story. Pretty amazing that you did this with a wacky short story generator. Overall: I really liked the style of the piece. Very descriptive, ...

Hey, wariofart here. Gonna run through your poem, than give it an overall. We caught the fire raw limbed and ashy, crawling from your bedroom Yuck. Great imagery though. door ...

Hi Sierra. This prolouge was actually pretty good. It set a very authentic medieval tone. I don't really like Fantasy stories, but this wasn't overly medivealish. The biggest problem though, ...

Hey Rachel! So I know it's too late to edit for the contest, but I'll still give a review of it. I really like the idea of this letter, to ...

Hey, wariofart here. You're right, this really is a very strange "story". I'm not even sure how I should review it, but let me try. Sorry if this is a ...