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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Enter the Sea

    I agree with the person above, I think it is a great poem but the "Enter the Sea," makes it seem like a song or a verse. That is the ...

    Aug 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Miracle in Iraq

    In Iraq solders shoot without mercy roads explode constantaly fathers die without question children and wifes mourn and then one day.... heads turn upward as a burst of fluffy white ...

    Aug 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: War Mage

    Ash woke with a sense that something momentous was going to happen that day. For a while he lay in his bed trying to figure out what it was, as ...

    Aug 26, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My father was killed in Iraq

    Its a great poem, My father is also in the military. I am terribly sorry for your loss and it mustve been very hard for your loss. The poem is ...

    Aug 26, 2008
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Tick...Tick...Boom.

    Our school was never closed after hours, not directly anyway. The last members of the administration, staff and faculty usually hung around until the late hours of the evening, and ...

    Aug 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shoot the Dove

    I gave you my heart, And it came with a reason. You took it and broke it, Then left like a season. I think the poem is very intresting, I ...

    Aug 20, 2008


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