WaltzingDreams

Yeah, kinda learned that the hard way, as the story said. Thanks for the review :)

It would make a good closing. Just revise it a little, steering it back to the topic :)

I see that there are grammatical mistakes. If you can, will you PM me the mistakes you've found? It'll be great help :)

Thanks for catching those punctuation Errs. :) Will fix it and do that rating suggestion. Good luck at review day! ^^

Thanks for the advice! Reason why I wrote all those strange directions was that this piece was actually performed, and the actors I got weren't good, knew not a thing ...

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Awh, then thanks for the effort to read it :))

Thanks for the review. And yes, I would appreciate it if you pointed the errors that you found. PM me if they're REAllY long or what. :)

Thanks for all the feedback and the corrections! ^.^ The lack of description was because that was just a prologue. It gets more detailed when I upload the next chapter. ...

This is so cute... Can't say anything less! I hope you do continue with that intention of the sequel ;)

You're welcome. So, is Progufus a man or a woman? Cuz I really want to know :)

Thank you so much for the review and the advice! :) Advance Happy New Year as well :)

Thanks for the feedback! I've been waiting for a critique like this, thank you for satisfying that! A night fury reviewing this doesn't really bother me. hehe. Also keep in ...

Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate it ^.^

haha, okay. Whatever you say, still your poem after all :) Following you now! Merry Christmas to you too ^.^