WallFlower

Hi :) WallFlower here for a review. This poem is very intriguing. I love the ending! It's the perfect ending stanza; it addresses the reader and leaves them (or in ...

Hi :) WallFlower here. Just like the last chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter as well. Your writing style is gripping, and I love it. i also love your characterization. ...

Hi :) WallFlower her for a review. First off, I really like this story. The way you wrote Adre's transformation was graphic and gripping, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your ...

Hi :) WallFlower here for a review. I really like this piece. It's intriguing and very descriptively written, which I like. Just a few critiques. Renald already pointed out the ...

Hi :) WallFlower here for a review. This is a very interesting prologue. Your story is intriguing, and it promises good things to come. There was one continuous error I ...

Hi :) WallFlower here for a review. That was a really good story, in my opinion. It was captivating, and I loved it! Your writing style is a pleasure to ...

Hi :) I would like to start off by saying that I like the plot behind your story. I'm a big fan of murder mysteries, and the plot of this ...

THAT TWIST! I was not expecting that twist. Never did that even cross my mind. I really like this poem as well as your writing style. Great job, especially with ...

Hi :) WallFlower here for a review. First, I LOVE BATS! So I don't think you're weird or anything :) I've heard of White Nose Syndrome. I know a cavern ...

Hi :) WallFlower here for a review. As far as the basics of the plot go, this sounds like a very interesting story. I would probably want to read it ...

Wow, that was awesome :) You had me hooked from the beginning, and didn't let me go until the very last word. It's an amazing story with a great plot, ...

Hi there :) I really like this piece. It's got the perfect amount of darkness in it for me, as well as light. Your wording was fluid and moving. Good ...

Hi :) First, I really like these poems, especially the last two. To me they seem more powerful and poignant. I'll go through them one at a time. On the ...

Hi there. :) First things first, I love the cynical tone this whole piece has. It's refreshing (to me, at least) and relatable. Great job on the character development. He ...

Hi there :) Wow, you've really gotten me intrigued. I'm also very confused, but I'm thinking all will be explained in later chapters. These are my questions: Who is the ...