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Hey GrymmRipper, I really enjoyed this poem. I just loved the whole genre of it. I think my favorite stanza was the first one, however i felt the last line ...

I definitely like what I've read so far. However, two things I'd change. "She was the new girl in school, with her dark black short hair that hung down to ...

Well for the most part I liked this, and I'm sure you kind of just went on a writing rant, which i enjoy doing a lot myself, but my parts ...

I really liked this so far! :) I definitely like the first person point of view, but I think it's even better how you make it seem like the reader ...

I definitely liked the whole symbolism of the snowglobe and how they feel also fits in with the season :P But I also adored the line "The answer was never ...

I think this was quite the cute poem! And honestly, this totally describes me and my best friend XD Although to go with the post above me you could either ...

Very intriguing story. One grammar thing I'd like to point out is there shouldn't be a comma before "I use as a purse" that threw me off for a second. ...

Excellent paper! While I was reading the short stories, many of the specific quotes I felt were important you incorporated into your paper, and you seemed to pick up on ...