WaitingForLife

Ciao, my friend, Life here! (Ah, that always makes me chuckle... "Hello, I'm Life, great to meet ya!") This really is growing interesting, I can't wait for that big and ...

Heya, long time, no read. :D Haha, got me laughing, this one did, which I may presume was your intention. ;) The characters are nice and fleshed out, as per ...

Heya, I only got through the first few paragraphs, but I have to say... this was brilliant. I really like your writing style and the clever wit of the MC ...

Heya! Here to help to the best of my ability: :) As this is for an English class ( if I didn't completely misinterpret), I'll try to be as thorough ...

Hello! I'm Life and I'll be helping you out with your story today. :) You certainly have a lot of potential. This was really well written, and I found your ...

This was really nicely written, the rhymes flowed smoothly and the story itself was so unusual that it brought a nice little taste to it all. In my opinion, you ...

So... I was happened to be listening to this song at the same time: , and it went perfectly with this. Jus' sayin'. Anyhow, two suggestions: In the very first ...

This captures the essence of my attempts at writing perfectly! I've nothing to criticize, this was so true and very well written. Be proud of it, and do keep writing. ...

This was really great. No doubts there. Now, I could do some nitpicking, but I'm really not in the mood for that. But what I do suggest, is to calm ...

Alrighty then, I reviewed your earlier chapter and I have to say... wow. Why didn't you write it like this in the start? This seems written by a different person. ...

Alrighty then, I'm going to be ignoring every comment above me (cause I'm lazy and don't feel like reading them), so forgive me if I re-state something. Magic, magic, magic... ...

Alrighty then. First off, sorry for taking so long to get to this; schoolwork had me down and under. Analytic geometry my a**... Second off, sorry for the completely useless ...

Oh it was terrible enough. I think the writer in me is in its death-throws. :D The clichés were excellent and the whole piece was so devoid of imagery it ...

Heya, I'm Life and I'll be going over a few points with you today. I liked this. I like your writing style very much; you use a more educated language ...

I'm not sure what you were going for here, maybe the thoughts of a breaking down machine? The idea itself was sort of cool, but now it seems as if ...