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I LOVED the Infinity Code. It was so original I overlooked the shallow characters and paper thin plot. It was the first Artemis I read, and I thought his character ...

You really need to work on your description. While the reader is responsible for filling in most of the blanks for what the main character looks like, the writer has ...

Advanced Critique in the Fantasy forum? :O For every paragraph/sentance I thought felt awkward, or worded weirdly, a wrote a comment in or underneath it. The fonts aren't working for ...

The Maximum Ride series. I swear, his writing style is a dumbed down HP minus the captivating characters/plot. The narrator Max constantly compares every over-the-top action scene "like it was ...

You're story was alot more engaging than i'd expected, or up to a few plot points atleast. Miriam was very interesting with her powers of extreme perception. You sort of ...