VolcanoSpirit

I really liked this story! It's so well written and captivating. The beginning of the story when it's saying how it wasn't her mom's baby made me curious and want ...

Wow. This is a really cool story. When I read this I could feel a mysterious aura from it that made me want to read more. The explosions, fireworks, and ...

When I read this story, I could really feel the emotions of the characters. I like how the dialogue and dialogue tags show how Ruby and Bonnie feel, and it ...