VivielTwixt

Profread your paper. There's a lot of errors, like the misspelled "throughput" in the first sentence and the switching of Stephanie's name to "Sasha" in the second to last paragraph. ...

Chapter 2 finally! Just kidding. You were pretty quick with posting it. I'm a bit late. Now, on with the review. Develop Cerinia more. I agree with the other reviewer ...

I'll start off saying I'm new to YWS. I haven't done many reviews, so I may not be as helpful as other reviewers. I'll do my best anyway. And... I ...

I've read the prologue, Ch.1, and Ch.1 continuation. I think it will be easier if I rate them all at once here. The prologue rambles on about how heartbroken Karen ...

I love your style. The whole New York feel, the dialects, and the main character. You're really good at style. You should either replace the quote or revise the entire ...