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Ha, this is kind of odd, I just had to write one for my English final too. :) Are you thinking of submitting to NPR? Anyway, I believe in pushing ...

As Clare Boothe Luce once said, “Because I am a woman, I must make unusual efforts to succeed. If I fail no one will say, “She doesn’t have what it ...

I agree with Rei that it was a bit of a filler and not too much happened, but I didn't find any huge mistakes or anything either. You might want ...

Hello, I think it's fine if you're not concerned with the grammar aspect of a piece, if you're going to fix it yourself. But starting like that totally turned me ...

Hey! This is a bit of a quick review, as I haven't got a whole lot of time right now, but I wanted to stop by. I *really* liked it. ...

Hello again! A bit of grammar stuff first: It didn’t look quite appetizing, but it smelled all right. ....smelled alright . Angie watched me eat for a little while. I ...

Pirates. Uhmmm, yummmy

I'm reviewing as I read so... : It took me two years to become a postman. To pass the test I had to carry a seventy pound bag of mail ...

The other critiques mostly covered what I wanted to say. *But* I don't think you should scratch this idea. If you do want to continue it you should think about ...

Okay, so first of all, I loved it. It was a sort of romantic idea, (The piano, the time period) but you pulled it off very well. I enjoyed it ...

I really, really liked this. It took the first couple paragraphs for me to get what it was about, but I think I like it that way, it was a ...

Very, very cool idea. I have to ask, have you ever seen the movie Chocolat ? Because this, especially the beginning paragraphs, reminded me of it very much. Anyways, talking ...

I enjoyed this alot myself. And at first I agreed with the others, because of how sophisticated the language was, but then I came to like it the way it ...

I like the idea of this poem in theory..but the actual execution of it didn't really work for me. Free verse isn't really my thing though. I think it would ...

I'm not an expert on poetry by any means, but I didn't think it was as iffy as the others think. The meaning wasn't totally clear but it came off ...