VioletJune

Wow, I really, realy, REALLY liked this. Totally captured the mood of the situation and portrayed it in an interesting light. Nice job!

I liked this because it was very true, your wording skills are great and I hope you post more :)

Well everyone else can disregard my last comment seeing as she fixed everything lol

Aww that's like my favorite line! Haha but I totally get your point. . . It does change the tone. . . Oh well though. And no we haven't officially ...

I liked this, pretty short and sweet and to the point. I found it quiet relatable and liked the way it flowed.

Thanks for your input I really, really appreciate it :) I'll try putting it up in dramatic poetry and see what I get there lol.

Wow. I really most certainly enjoyed this lol. It flowed very smoothly and I totally didn't expect him to be the killer! Love love love it haha- Vi :)

Um, wow. This is fantastic in my opinion, you're writing style is super original and totally kept me interested. The subject, the main character, the plot- totally had me pulled ...

This story seems a little awkward, I like the idea but the way some sentences fit together was just confusing and random. Hope you keep trying and good luck :)

Wow! Thanks :) and no this wasn't a personal experience, I was just thinking of it haha.

Thanks :) and yes if you want you could post it on your facebook, I would feel honored :) but sorry about the roughness, I've never really done poetry before ...

Ok idk what happened but I didn't want to post this now, and I need to edit it so my appologies. It's also missing a part- that's what the random ...

Thanks but this is like the same response I get each time and it's so frustrating! I don't know where to post this because every time I post it somewhere ...

Ahh my muse finally arives! Hello Kathryn Marie :)

Thanks! Man haha I was starting to wonder if anyone was going to comment, I was like damn is it really that bad? But yeah haha I like the thong ...